Aimz (![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} aimala1) wrote in belador, |
I loved it. I felt the intensity and the desperation,and you did a great job building up the sexual tension. I like the idea that The Others injected them with some sort of testosterone. Interesting to have them both say that they have already admitted their attraction to the same sex. It would have worked without that because they were in an altered state with the drugging, but it was interesting nonetheless. It is usually the white elephant in the room for me with slash fics like "do they admit they might be gay or just go for it."
[i]Sawyer’s lust was momentarily tinged with sadness as he realised it’d been much too long since Jack had been touched like this, intimately[/i]
I liked this line especially because it is so true about Jack.
Great job, post more fics
[i]Sawyer’s lust was momentarily tinged with sadness as he realised it’d been much too long since Jack had been touched like this, intimately[/i]
I liked this line especially because it is so true about Jack.
Great job, post more fics
