belador ([info]belador) wrote,
Ah thank you. Reading it through again I guess I am pretty happy with it, the main issue I had was that I felt like I lost the dark edge in the second half, but I did want a 'happy end', so maybe that was inevitable. Thank you for reading and commenting :) Glad you like the dark edge too, I'm writing a quickie at the moment that's pretty grim... ;)


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